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'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

PostPosted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 1:21 am
by ChildofWoz
I am truly afraid to no longer be
Content in my own misery;
That there is no heaven nor no hell,
No place for the lost souls to dwell,
Doth break fearsome Moros' chain,
Wreaking havoc, bringing pain.
Love hath no memory, say so, dear,
Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear
To wreak the havoc of destiny
And banish heaven of her myst'ry.

ALW, 3/16/2011

Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:10 pm
by Fragment
Powerful piece, especially having it in just one stanza. I like "Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear" -Nice work

Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2011 4:13 pm
by ChildofWoz
Fragment wrote:Powerful piece, especially having it in just one stanza. I like "Let loose the wretched tendrils of fear" -Nice work


Thank you, I really appreciate the positive feedback.

Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:49 pm
by Raphael
I find the rhythm to be very smooth and the expression quite powerful- well done Child of Woz.

Re: 'I am truly afraid to no longer be'

PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 9:32 pm
by ChildofWoz
Raphael wrote:I find the rhythm to be very smooth and the expression quite powerful- well done Child of Woz.

Thank you kindly, it means much to me.