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Two doves

PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:00 am
by Pjerrot
I saw two doves
together
on the ground
trying to find
peace
in search of
harmony
a dream

Re: Two doves

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:48 pm
by Fragment
I'm normally not one for short poems, but I find this one rather intriguing.

I like how the flow goes from "together" to "on the ground". Both lines have 3 syllables, but they feel in a way similar and different. They are hard sounding words and they feel rushed compared to the rest of the poem.