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Ode to A Woman

PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:54 am
by littlelamb
she is gone and nothing is left but groan
nor hope nor love remain in thy suffered mind
shrink thy sweetest smile into a mournful moan
sprinkle thy heart and fill with sore and pain
but still, still love her in deepest
called her name in thy dreams,
tried to take her back in thy breath,
yet, to love her and to be loved is the hardest
'O, Time, why wouldst thou left me in thy stream?'
'O, Life, should I have to make love with the Death?'

nay, thy grievance, thy lament may never been ceas'd
though in thy solitude, thy soul withered like a leaf
but ay, what thou hast seen just a delusion
of a heaven's angel who never been reach'd
of a morning's cloud that never been relieve
and still, still hope for thy redemption

Look,deep upon heedless sight of thine eyes
There always a love that never dies

-here is my original works. hope you all like it and appreciate. big thanks!

Re: Ode to A Woman

PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:43 pm
by Raphael
I like! Rather Shakespearean- thanks for posting it.