Symphonic Rain

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Symphonic Rain

Postby Fragment » Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:57 pm

Symphonic Rain
G Collins, 2/10/2010

Incline to eavesdrop on the sound

Ageless needles drop from a tireless pine
Their descent releases thin translucent pools
Into larger puddles on the pavement parking lot

Silvery spites nose-dive toward a parched earth
Their sweating skin soaks through soil
Suppressing the resonance of nature into silken slumbering

Watery crescents form around a castle of pebbles
A crystalline queen sleeps within her shelter
She's subconsciously whispering secrets into the drizzly darkness
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Re: Symphonic Rain

Postby WolfLarsen » Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:17 am

I liked the first half of this poem the best. To make something beautiful out of a puddle on a parking lot is not easy, congratulations.
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