Cold cuts.
And suddenly
All the words
Are a stack of
Nothing, left
In a corner
To silence
And to rot
As if they
Had never
Contained
Hopes, and
Dreams of
New love.
_____
Cold cuts
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Re: Cold cuts
by MsPoetess » Thu Aug 01, 2019 1:49 pm
Love the syllabic verse/progression from the 4-3 even flow down to succinct lines of 2.. really ties the feel of abandonment together.
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Re: Cold cuts
by Saturn » Thu Aug 01, 2019 5:01 pm
Hey there, thanks, I appreciate the feedback, and welcome to the forum!
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